Hye, I am Aqilah. I’m going to share with all of you some parts of my second assignment on analyzing sentence structure.
I chose an academic article and tried to analyze the sentences used in it.
So, here is the text :
During adolescence, about 8% of boys and 6% of girls report engaging in some same-sex activity or feeling strong attractions to individuals of their own sex. Males are more likely than females to experiment with same-sex partners as adolescents, but females are more likely to experiment later, often in college. Fewer adolescents actually have a homosexual or bisexual orientation-about 4% of adolescents identify themselves as gay (males who chose male partners), lesbian (females who chose female partners), or bisexual (people who have partners of both sexes). This number increases to between 5% to 13% for adults (Savin-William, 2006).
Scientists debate origins of homosexuality. Most of the research has been with men, so less is known about women. Evidence so far suggests that both biological and social factors are involved. For example, sexual orientation is more similar to identical twins than for fraternal twins, but not all identical twins have the same sexual orientation (Ruble et al., 2006)
There are quite a few models describing the development of sexual orientation as part of identity. Generally, the models include the following or similar stages (Yarhouse, 2001).
- Feeling different- Beginning around age 6, the child may be less interested in the activities of other children who are the same sex. Some children may find this difference troubling and fear being “found out.” Others do not experience these anxieties.
- Feeling confused- In adolescence, as they feel attractions for peers of the same sex, students may be confused, upset, lonely, and unsure of what to do. They may lack role models and may try to change themselves by becoming involved in activities and dating patterns that fit heterosexual stereotypes.
- Acceptance- As young adults, many individuals sort through sexual orientation issues and identify themselves as gay, lesbian, or bisexual. They may or may not make their sexual orientation public, but might share the information with a few friends.
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Sentence:
- During adolescence about 8% of boys and 6% of girls report engaging in some same-sex activity or feeling strong attractions to individuals of their own sex.
Explanation:
The underlined parts are the independent clauses, while the bold word is a conjunction. It is a compound sentence as there are two independent clauses that are connected with conjunction “or” and both clauses share the same subject.
Sentence:
- Males are more likely than females to experiment with same-sex partners as adolescents, but females are more likely to experiment later, often in college.
Explanation:
Two independent clauses are underlined in this sentence, while the bold word is a conjunction. Meanwhile, the italic clause is a subordinate element. This sentence is a compound complex sentence as there are two independent clauses that are connected with conjunction “but” and there is also a subordinate element at the end of the sentence.
Sentence:
- This number increases to between 5% to 13% for adults.
Explanation:
This is a simple sentence with “this number” as the subject, followed by “increases to between 5% to 13% for adults” as the predicate.
Sentence:
- Scientists debate origins of homosexuality.
Explanation:
It is a simple sentence in which “scientists” is the subject and the rest of the sentence is the predicate.
Sentence:
- Most of the research has been with men, so less is known about women.
Explanation:
Both independent clauses are underlined in this sentence, while the conjunction “so” is bold. This is a compound sentence where two independent clauses are joined by a coordinating conjunction “so”.
Sentence:
- For example, sexual orientation is more similar to identical twins than for fraternal twins, but not all identical twins have the same sexual orientation.
Explanation:
The subordinate element is in the italic font, while the independent clauses of this sentences are underlined. Plus, the bold word is the conjunction. As conclusion, this is a compound complex sentence. It contains a subordinate element at the beginning of it and followed by two independent clauses that are joined with coordinating conjunction “but”.
Sentence:
There are quite a few models describing the development of sexual orientation as part of identity.
Explanation:
This is a complex sentence where the independent clause is underlined and the dependent clause is in the italic form.
Sentence:
- Beginning around age 6, the child may be less interested in the activities of other children who are the same sex.
Explanation:
At the beginning of this sentence, the italic words is all a dependent clause, while the underlined clause is the independent one. So, this is a complex sentence.
Sentence:
- Some children may find this difference troubling and fear being “found out.”
Explanation:
This is a compound sentence in which the underlined clauses are the independent ones, both clauses are joined with a coordinating conjunction “and”.
Sentence:
- Others do not experience these anxieties.
Explanation:
This is a simple sentence in which “others” acts as the subject, while the rest of the sentence is the predicate.
Sentence:
- In adolescence as they feel attractions for peers of the same sex, students may be confused, upset, lonely, and unsure of what to do.
Explanation:
This complex sentence contains both one independent clause and one dependent clause. The independent one is underlined; meanwhile the dependent one is in the italic form.
Sentence:
- As young adults, many individuals sort through sexual orientation issues and identify themselves as gay, lesbian, or bisexual.
Explanation:
Compound complex sentence.
Sentence:
- They may or may not make their sexual orientation public, but might share the information with a few friends.
Explanation:
This is a compound sentence because those two underlined independent clauses that share the same subject are connected by coordinating conjunction “but”.
I hope now you can clearly the difference between those forms of sentences. If there is any mistake, please let me know. Thank you!